Kia ora Shannon, what beautiful writing! I love the idea of entering a door of happiness! Your opening sentence was very descriptive and did grab my attention. I also really like the way your blog post describes what your learning was. Ka pai! Next time could you add a simile or a metaphor to your story? Are you going to write about any of the other doorways? blog you later, Megan : )
Hi Shannon,Zejm here. I really like the way you did your doorway writing and the way you described it. How long did it take you to make and what was the hardest and what was the easiest? Blog ya later Zejm<:
Kia Ora Shannon, My name is Palak from Room 23 and I really loved your doorway writing! :D You put a lot of effort into your work! ^_^ Your writing reminded me of mine!🌺🌺🌺 How long did it take you to write all this?😄😄 Make sure to check out my class blog and my blog! Have a great day! Blog you later! ^_^ ^_^
Kia ora Shannon, what beautiful writing! I love the idea of entering a door of happiness! Your opening sentence was very descriptive and did grab my attention. I also really like the way your blog post describes what your learning was. Ka pai! Next time could you add a simile or a metaphor to your story? Are you going to write about any of the other doorways? blog you later, Megan : )
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Megan,
Deletethank you for the comment and yes I could've used a simile or a metaphor but I forgot about putting those in.
blog ya later,
Shannon :)
Hello Shannon,
ReplyDeleteI like you doorway writing. What did the bird's sound like? How long did it take you to write it?
Blog Ya Later!
Good job my friend (:
ReplyDeleteHi Shannon,Zejm here.
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you did your doorway writing and the way you described it.
How long did it take you to make and what was the hardest and what was the easiest? Blog ya later Zejm<:
Kia Ora Shannon,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Palak from Room 23 and I really loved your doorway writing! :D
You put a lot of effort into your work! ^_^
Your writing reminded me of mine!🌺🌺🌺
How long did it take you to write all this?😄😄
Make sure to check out my class blog and my blog!
Have a great day!
Blog you later!
^_^ ^_^